Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Midterm Writing Project


Writing Composition – Midterm

Due February 6th, 2013


In order to demonstrate your progress in your writing, you will write a persuasive writing piece on an issue of your choice. This writing assignment will showcase your competence with persuasive style and ability to use writing for constructive communication.


Assignment: Your task in this composition is to address an arguable issue, take a stance, present your ideas, and refute contradictory ideas. You may use any media/genre you choose, as long as you are able to satisfactorily present a meaningful and thoughtful argument. The following are suggestions for media:

·      Anecdote/short story
·      Poem or collection of poems
·      Letter
·      Traditional essay
·      Song
·      Dialogue
                                        …and many more.


Your composition should be typed in 12-point font, double-spaced, with one-inch margins. It should be no fewer than two pages.


Tips for success on this project:
·      Start early. The more time you allow yourself, the better your argument will be.
·      Ask questions. I’m here to support you throughout this project—you are absolutely welcome to ask for help, to bounce ideas off me, or to just chat.
·      Choose an issue that really matters to you; not only will it be easier for you to write about it, but the writing will have much more life.
·      Be sure to consider all sides and counterarguments; be open-minded enough to understand the opposition’s viewpoint.

January 30th, 2013

1/30/13

In Class:
Journal--  Describe an argument you've had with your parents, your significant other, or a close friend. What were you arguing about? What did each side believe? How did it end up?

GMX--  Verbs and Verbal Phrases

Underline the linking verbs; box the action verbs; circle the helping verbs.
The BFG took his time. He was very dignified in his approach. When he was close to the window where the three of them were standing, he stopped and made a slow, graceful bow. His head, after he had straightened up again, was almost exactly level with the watchers at the window. From The BFG by Roald Dahl



Discussed the argument of gay marriage and conventions of argumentative writing using persuasive format graphic organizer.

Students worked independently on midterm writing projects.

Homework:
Complete both sides of persuasive writing graphic organizer.
Catch up on missing work.

January 29th, 2013

1/29/13

In Class:
Journal--  Describe the person who taught you how to tie your shoes.

GMX--  Verbs and Verbal Phrases
Add helping verbs to the following sentences:
1) Eric learns the bass.

2) Shannon and Slyker played hackeysack.
3) Richy wrote a short story.
4) Marcos decapitates the zombie.
5) Chase got highlights.

Instruction in persuasive writing, including definitions of subject, stance, purpose, and audience.
Read "The M-Word: Why It Matters to Me" by Andrew Sullivan and screened "The Consequences of Homosexual Marriage" and discussed the dimensions of opposing viewpoints.

Introduced midterm project (see separate post).

Exit ticket: What is the first thing you want new people to know about you?

Homework:
Fill out the "My Argument" side of the graphic organizer distributed in class (pictured below).




January 28th, 2013

1/28/13

In Class:
Journal--  Relate the following quote to writing: “When you try to make almost anything, you are probably working in a tradition, whether you know it or not. It is almost more interesting not to know it, and only belatedly come to see that the tradition was working in you before you were conscious of yourself working in it.” -Franklin Burroughs

GMX--  Verbs and Verbal Phrases
First, bracket and cross out prep. phrases; then, identify the action verbs; then, identify the subjects.
With the fleshy green boats in hand, we slice vertical strips from one end to the other. Vegetable planks. We smother the avocado with salsa, hot chiles at noon in the desert. We look at each other and smile, eating avocados with sharp silver blades, risking the blood of our tongues repeatedly. From “An Unspoken Hunger” by Terry Tempest Williams
Introduction to Helping Verbs and verbs of more than one word. Examples include: can, will, may, shall, must, could, would, should, might
Underline the complete verbal phrase, then box the main verb.
1) Language researchers at the University of Arizona have been studying parrots.
2) Dr. Irene Pepperberg has worked with Alex, an African Gray parrot, for years.
3) Nearly one hundred words can be used by this intelligent bird.
4) Alex has been counting to six.
5) Currently, he and the other parrots are learning letters and their sounds.


Screen example of reverse/mirror poetry: “Lost Generation."

Class read “A Wind from the North" by Bill Capossere and “The Snow Man" by Wallace Stevens.
Defined and discussed ‘motifs.’
motif: a recurring image or idea used to help express a point or convey a theme.

Exit ticket: If you could choose one song as the soundtrack to this past weekend, what would it be?

Homework:
Write a piece using a motif related to nature.

Catch up on missing work.

Friday, January 25, 2013

January 25th, 2013

1/25/13

In Class:
Journal--  What is your stance on gun control?

GMX-- Subjects, Verbs, and Prepositions
Diagnostic evaluation (quiz-ish).


Workshop: class reviewed and workshopped pieces by Anthony T., Marcos, and Chase.

Homework:
Prepare one piece for submission on Monday!
Catch up on any missing work.

January 24th, 2013

1/24/13

In Class:
Journal--  Respond to the following quote: "Darkness cannot drive out darkness; only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that." -Martin Luther King, Jr.

GMX--  Action Verbs and Linking Verbs
In part a, identify the action verb.
In part b, identify the linking verb, the noun, and the descriptor. 
1) a. Jerry slept through the night.
    b. Jerry is sleepy today.
2) a. Ronda argues with teachers between classes.
    b. Ronda always was the best debater.
3) a. Ron and Brick report the news at 5 o’clock.
    b. Alex and John are anchormen.


In pairs, students researched types of formal poetry: paradelle/mirror poetry/reverse poetry, sonnet, villanelle, concrete poetry, and décima. Pairs were asked to answer the following questions:
1) What are the standards/conventions/formal qualities of this style of poetry?
2) What are common themes explored in this style of poetry?
3) What are the historical origins of this style of poetry?
4) Find a good example of this style of poetry.
Each pair presented their findings to the class.

Exit ticket: Describe a linking verb.

Homework:
Write your own poem as an example of any one of the forms we studied today.

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

January 23rd, 2013

1/23/13

In Class:
Journal--  Using each and every one of your five senses, describe your least favorite food in excruciating detail.

GMX-- Prepositional Phrases and Action Verbs
In the newspaper article handout, bracket every prepositional phrase.
Write a brief story of everything you've done this morning. Circle every action verb.

Studied the genre of ode using "Ode of Remembrance" by Laurence Binyon, "Ode to My Socks" by Pablo Neruda, and "Ode to the Hymen" by Sharon Olds. Noted conventions of the ode: praise/idealization of subject, lofty language, apostrophe, development of a broader significance.

Modeled the development of ode content by describing and praising a recycling bin.

Homework:
Write an ode to an inanimate object.
Catch up on missing work.

January 22nd, 2013

1/22/13

In Class:
Journal--  Respond to the following quotes:
“The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.” -Mark Twain
“By words we learn thoughts, and by thoughts we learn life.” -Jean Baptiste Girard

GMX-- Prepositional Phrases and Action Verbs
Write a sentence about your day so far using at least two prepositional phrases.
Circle the action verbs in the following excerpt:
   Sometimes the combination of talent and persistence explodes into well-deserved fame and fortune. For almost a year, J.K. Rowling survived on public assistance in Edinburgh, Scotland. Almost every day that year, she brought her baby to a coffee shop near their damp unheated apartment. In the warmth of the café, the divorced, unemployed mother sat and wrote. Almost at the end of her endurance, she finally finished her book. Today, Rowling’s Harry Potter books sell hundreds of millions of copies in sixty languages.


Defined and discussed diction and syntax.
Diction: the choice and use of words in speech or writing.
Syntax: the order/sequence of words.
“All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.” -Ernest Hemingway
The significance of word choice in writing, especially in poetry: as we discussed last week, the quantity and quality of words is crucial in expression. The only way to write ‘the truest sentence that you know’ is by carefully and deliberately choosing and arranging the truest words you know.


Studied the genre of haiku/tanka. Noted conventions of haiku, including: syllable count (5/7/5, in contrast with Japanese on), concept of kiru or cutting, and incorporation of 'season' words. Noted conventions of tanka: similar to haiku, only with an additional couplet of seven syllables.

“The haiku that reveals seventy to eighty percent of its subject is good. Those that reveal fifty to sixty percent, we never tire of.” -Matsuo Bashō, Japanese poet and pioneer of haiku format
Shared zombie haikus.
 

Exit ticket: What is a preposition?

Homework:
Write a haiku, tanka, or series of haikus about something that frustrates you endlessly.
 

Friday, January 18, 2013

January 17th, 2013

1/17/13

In Class:
Journal--  Make a list of all the roles and traits you take on in your life. Use "I am..." to begin each line.

GMX--  Prepositional Phrases
In the following sentences, bracket the prepositional phrases, circle the subjects, and box the verbs.
  1) On summer evenings, girls in white dresses stroll under the trees.
  2) From dawn to dusk, we hiked through the woods.
  3) The president of the college will speak on Tuesday.
  4) During journal time, Anthonys talked about Life Skills on Friday.

Studied the genre of recipe using a banana bread recipe and a recipe for happiness. Students independently wrote recipes for themselves, looking back on the journal prompt for help.

Writer's Workshop: The class reviewed George Orwell's questions and suggestions for writing well. The class then workshopped a model piece, looking for effective writing techniques and areas of improvement.

Exit Ticket: When was the last time you laughed so hard you cried?

Homework:
Prepare a piece to turn in on Monday!

Thursday, January 17, 2013

January 16th, 2013

1/16/13

In Class:
Journal--  Respond to the following quote: "Always be yourself, express yourself, and have faith in yourself. Do not go out and look for a successful personality and duplicate it." -Bruce Lee

GMX-- Prepositions and Prepositional Phrases
In the following sentences about the Appalachian Trail, bracket the prepositional phrases and circle the subjects.
   1) The famous trail stretches from Springer Mountain in Georgia to Mount Katahadin in Maine.
   2) One quarter of the trail goes through Virginia.
   3) The majority of walkers hike for one day.
   4) For most hikers, the trip through fourteen states takes four or five months.

Discussed the dimensions of "Expression and Reflection" in writing and the relationship of the two elements. (See notes from another student.)
To practice expression & reflection, students practiced "What My Childhood Tastes Like." Model:
 
What My Childhood Tastes Like

- Plain cheese quesadillas, made by my mom in the miniscule kitchenette of our 1-bedroom apartment

- “Chicken”-flavored Ramen noodles, at home alone after school

- Cayenne pepper cherry Jell-o at my grandparents’ house

- Wheat toast slathered in peanut butter before school

- Lime and orange freezy-pops

- My stepdad’s meatloaf—ironically, the only meatloaf I’ve ever liked

- Cookie Crisp cereal (“It’s cookies—for breakfast!”)

- Macintosh apples and creamy Skippy peanut butter

- Tostitos Hint of Lime chips and salsa

- Love-Apple Stew that only my grandma can make right

- Caramel brownies, by my grandma who can’t bake anymore



My mom became a gourmet with only the most basic ingredients. We lived bare-bones in a one-bedroom apartment in the outskirts of Denver; for whatever selfless reason, she gave 4-year-old-me the bedroom and she took a futon in the living room. She would cook for me after caring for other mothers’ 4-year-olds all day long: usually plain cheese quesadillas (never any sort of add-ons, meats, or veggies—besides my abundant use of store-brand ketchup) or scrambled eggs (again, with puddles of ketchup).

When I was 6, my dad eventually used ketchup as a rationale for my second stepmom: “Shane, look! Judy likes ketchup on her eggs too!” But it was my mom I remembered cooking for me every night—not Judy, and certainly not my father.

“I don’t like that anymore. I like barbecue sauce on my eggs.”

Studied the genre of eulogy using a clip from Zoolander and a traditional eulogy. Appropriate humor, anecdote, focus on the deceased and the community of mourners.
Express and reflect: what story or explanation can you offer to express how you feel about the loss of this person? How does this change affect the lives of others?

Homework:
Write a brief eulogy for yourself, OR finish developing your "What My Childhood Tastes Like" story.
Find your book.
Catch up on any missed work.

January 15th, 2013

1/15/13

In Class:
Journal--  What is the last book you read? Was it required for school, or did you choose to read it? What did you 'take away' from it?

GMX--  Subjects
The following are incomplete sentences. Add a subject to complete them. Be creative!
  1) Raced down the street.
  2) Landed in the cornfield.
  3) Got out of the large gray van.

Studied the genre of classified ads using a page of the Longmont Times-Call. Discussed the economy of words, abbreviations, hook-lines, etc.
Using two items from their bucket lists, students wrote classified ads for resources to help them. For example:
Bucket list item- "I want to perform a song live with my favorite band, Say Anything."
Classified ad- WANTED: Someone with serious connections in the music industry. Alternative scene clout preferred. This does not include groupies or other diehard fans.
Revised ad- FTW! Serious connections in music industry. Alt. scene cred preferred. No groupies or fans.

Discussed the necessity of reading for writing. Distributed "Reading is Fundamental" from The Writer's Idea Book.

Homework:
Read "Reading is Fundamental" and complete guided notes.
Decorate notebook.
Find a book (any book) to read. Bring it to class tomorrow.

Writing Composition Syllabus

 
   Writing Composition
January 14th – March 7th, 2013
M-Th 9:00-10:30, Room 5
Shane Abrams
shaneabrams@boulderprep.org

Course Texts
Most course texts will be provided in handouts by the instructor or provided by the students themselves; a folder, binder, or other organizational system is highly recommended.
The following blog will also serve as a resource for disseminating materials and texts: 

Course Description
The purpose of this course is to introduce students to a variety of foundational writing techniques, media, and means. By frequent engagement in writing, reading, and speaking exercises, each student will hone his or her ability to communicate through writing using both an authentic voice and appropriate methods.

Learning Outcomes and Essential Questions
During this course, students will develop the ability to…
·       identify and articulate multiple genres and media for writing communication.
·       express themselves in writing using a unique voice.
·       describe and implement strategies to enhance their writing.
·       critique peers’ work in a respectful and constructive manner.
·       revise and improve their own writing using independent proofreading, peer critique, and instructor feedback.
We will aim to explore—perhaps even answer—some of the following questions:
·       How can we use writing to explore, explain, and understand our lives?
·       How can we make our writing true to our own thoughts, voice, and goals?
·       What concrete steps can we take to polish our writing?
·       What benefits are there to collaboration in writing? To workshopping and peer critique?
·       How do writers create depth and meaning?

Outcomes Assessment
The following assignments will be used to assess students’ progress toward learning outcomes: participation & attendance (graded daily); daily journals; in-class and out-of-class assignments; and a cumulative multi-genre final project. Additionally, other artistic or academic assignments may be collected and assessed when the instructor sees appropriate.

Classroom Policy – Grading, Attendance, and Comportment
Grades for Writing Composition will be calculated on a points-based scale; i.e., each assignment, including long-term projects and daily participation grades, will be valued at a certain number of points possible. Over the 8-week course, points possible will amount to roughly 1000-1200 points. At any time, a student may request his or her grade, and I will do my best to provide a response in a timely fashion.

Extra credit will not be provided, barring unforeseen, extenuating circumstances; therefore, students are expected to complete each and every assignment to the best of their respective abilities. Opportunity for success will not be withheld: each student will have the chance to excel, in terms of grades and personal growth. However, the burden lies upon the student to optimize these opportunities.

Students should attend all classes as possible. Even though Writing Composition meets daily, each absence is detrimental to learning potential. I will not deduct points for absences, whether they are excused or unexcused. However, students are always responsible for information, work, and cumulative assignments which they miss when absent: missing multiple classes will unforgivingly hinder a student’s academic success. If a student misses class, I advise visiting the course blog – http://boulderprepcomp.blogspot.com/— to see what she or he missed and what she or he needs in order to catch up. If you know in advance that you will miss a class, please consult with me beforehand.

Students are expected to arrive to class on time. This means that each student should be sitting at a desk with all necessary materials, including any assigned reading for the class, ready to begin working at 9:00. This does not mean walking from the Commons to the classroom at 9:00; this does not mean arriving at 8:59 and leaving to use the bathroom until 9:05. In regards to breaks: there will be no out-of-class breaks. You should think of yourselves as adults during this class: leave the classroom only when you must and only when it is appropriate. At the maximum, only one student should be out of the classroom at any given time.

My classroom is a place for personal growth, be it intellectual, emotional, or otherwise. I expect all students to help me maintain an environment conducive to such growth. All students are entitled to the right to improve and evolve, and no person should infringe upon this right in any manner. My classroom will be a safe and respectful environment for my students to exercise their right to learn.

Course Specific Grades:
Daily participation – 10 pts. / day
Daily journals – 160 pts.
General assignments (in-class and homework) – approx. 350 pts.
Summative assessment (Final project) – 350 pts.
                  * see particular assignment sheets for specific breakdown and expectations

Academic Honesty
Plagiarism and cheating, whether intentional or unintentional, shall not be tolerated. Every student is expected to follow any and all codes of academic honesty endorsed by Boulder Preparatory High School.

Electronic Devices
In order to facilitate the development of a respectful and focused classroom environment, students are asked to refrain from the use of cell phones and other unnecessary and/or distracting devices during class time. When you are in class, regardless of the nature of the activity, your cell phone should be put away, your music device shut off, and any other devices out of sight. Devices that seem to be distracting any student will be impounded for the remainder of the period.

Materials Needed
Please bring these things to class every day:
Writing materials (pen/pencil, paper)
Course texts
Recommended: Binder, folder, or other organizational system for hand-out readings

Approximate Schedule of Study and Curriculum
This schedule is a rough estimate and is subject to change. Please refer to daily assignments for more accurate information.                

Week one (1/14 – 1/18)
Introduction to Writing Composition
Content, Ideas, and Inspiration
Non-academic non-fiction


Week two (1/22 – 1/25)
*Note: class this week will meet Tuesday-Friday due to the holiday on Monday.
Diction, Word Choice, and Description
Poetry



Week three (1/28 – 2/1)
Flow and Figurative Language
Poetry


Week four (2/4 – 2/8)
Audience and Organization
Essays




Week five (2/11 – 2/15)
Voice and Voices
Essays and Narrative


Week six (2/19 – 2/22)
*Note: class this week will meet Tuesday-Friday due to the holiday on Monday.
Workshopping and Collaborative Writing
Narrative and Traditional Non-fiction


Week seven (2/25 – 3/1)
Compiling, Revising, Polishing, and Publishing
Final project


Week eight (3/4 – 3/8) –
Compiling, Revising, Polishing, and Publishing
Final project

Miscellaneous
I reserve the right to amend or alter this syllabus; please note that any changes are made in an effort to create the best possible academic environment. I will notify students of any such changes as promptly as possible.

I wholeheartedly welcome feedback. Please do not hesitate to provide response to my teaching practices, assignments, etc.—but please provide this feedback while class is not in session.

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I, _______________________________, hereby acknowledge that I have received and reviewed this syllabus. Any
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questions or concerns that have arisen have been addressed adequately.

I recognize that I am a student: I am capable of anything I encounter in this course, though it may be challenging—and it should be challenging. I will not state that I “can’t” do something, but that I “can’t yet.” I will ask for help when I need it, whether assistance is from Shane, from my peers, or from another responsible individual.

I will contribute to a classroom environment which is healthy, fun, welcoming, intellectual, emotional, and safe, among other things.

I will respect everyone’s educational opportunities; I will respect our building; I will respect my peers’ and instructors’ belongings; I will respect everyone’s right to make amends.

I will be the best person—intellectually, socially, and otherwise—that I can be.


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January 14th, 2013

1/14/13

In Class:
Reviewed and discussed syllabus (see separate blog entry) and other class expectations:
    - Each day will begin with a journal prompt and a GMX.
    - Each student will turn in at least one piece every Monday.
    - Thursdays will be ‘workshop’ days. Every student is expected to workshop at least one piece.


Journal--  Respond to the following quotes:
"You can't wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club." -Jack London.
"Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration." -Thomas Edison
 

GMX--  Instruction in nouns and sentence subjects.
Bracket all the nouns in the excerpt. Box all the subjects of the sentences.
     Dr. Leon Rappaport studies the fear factor in movies. Humans have always liked to explore their feelings of fear and anxiety, according to Rappaport. Frightening movies allow them to master those emotions and work through them. Other psychologists agree. People like to be scared in the absence of any real danger.

Discussed the nature of inspiration, including the concept of a 'muse' vs. hard work. Author Sherman Alexie on inspiration: 12:59 - 16:03.
"I write one page of masterpiece to ninety-nine pages of s---. I try to put the s--- in the wastebasket." -Ernest Hemingway

Instruction in the genre of lists and techniques.

Exit Ticket: Best/Worst 3 Things About High School.

Homework:
Write a bucket list of at least ten activities/possessions/skills/etc.
Decorate your writing journal.